Wednesday, October 1, 2008

Passive Voice Vomit

So I found this in the Writing Fellows office the other day and laughed so hard, I had to share it. This is what passive voice does to "Eight Days a Week" by the Beatles:

Oh, your love is needed by me babe,
The truth is known by you,
Hope my love is needed by you girl,
Just like you're needed by me.
I should be held by you.
I should be loved by you.
I should be held by you.
I should be loved by you.
Nothing but love is what I'm given,
Eight days a week!

It's so awful I can hardly stand it!!!

2 comments:

seanandnataliekowallis said...

Wow... that really is pretty bad...

Lia said...

Passive voice should be banned. (hahaha)